What do you think of my voice acting, here are two recorded scripts I have written.

I decided to take a shot at saying some lines for my upcoming game.

One is a character describing a house of terror.

The other one is an eccentric fellow describing his lovely house quaintly positioned next to the polluted brown waters of the lake

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There first one wasn't bad, definitely passable. There was something about it that put me off a bit but I'm afraid I can't quite put my finger on it.

The second wasn't as good. I felt like you were holding yourself back a little bit from fully getting into the character. It really feels like your just reading lines to your English class, especially when it got to the "uh-uh, hello? are you still listening?" bit. You speak it like your reading it, not saying it.

Keep working at it, and I'm sure you'll get there.

 

Double post, my bad.

 

Diction needs work. Maybe practice reading a from proper script (?). Good on you for trying though.