Slender: The Nine Pages

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  1. petrzmax

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    Slender: The Nine Pages begins with the player in a basement. The player is equipped with a flashlight and He is able to run for a short period of time before running out of breath. The objective of the game is to find nine pages and then escape from there.

    This is my first game. Please comment!

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    Changelog 0.6
    - Player's speed increased.
    - New scary thing.
    - Small optimization.

    Changelog 0.7
    - Resolution option in menu
    - Files optimization
    - Added lamp model
    - Improved slender script
    - Small fixes

    Changelog 0.8
    - Tv noise effect
    - Improved slender script
    - Adapted to the Web version
    - Mini game
    - New spawn points for keys
    - More stuff
    - New music in menu
    - Some fixes

    Changelog 1.0
    - Problem with collecting key (Sometimes, there wasn't key <TrollFace>)
    - small bug fixes
    - easter egg added

    Changelog 1.1
    - Fixed problem with stucking on walls
    - New Slender model
    - Window / Full screen mode in settings
    - small bug fixes

    Changelog 1.2
    - Fixed problem with collecting Key
    - Improved Easter Egg
    - Improved flashlight.
    - Improved control

    Changelog 1.3
    - Added Hardcore mode.
    - Added more sounds.
    - Added pipes.
    - Bug fixes.

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    Page on Facebook:
    http://www.facebook.com/SlenderTheNinePages


    Download Slender: The Nine Pages v1.3 for Windows


    Download Slender: The Nine Pages v1.3 for Linux


    Version 1.3+ has better graphic!


    Download Slender: The Nine Pages v1.3+ for Windows


    Download Slender: The Nine Pages v1.3+ for Linux


    Download Slender: The Nine Pages v1.3+ for Mac


    Or try webplayer version here
    Last edited: Dec 8, 2013
  2. Blasfemmy

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    Can you post some screenshots or a video, so that we know what we will be downloading?

    Also, are you making this as an educational experience or do you have the goal of releasing this commercially?
  3. petrzmax

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    I'm doing this as an educational experience. I'm learning Unity and C#. I will add screenshots in a couple of minutes.
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  4. dtg108

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    I don't mind Slender, but some people think that it's too overused. He said it was for a learning project, before you even come on here saying slenderman is overused, he was doing it for a project, leave him alone.

    Great game, it was fun, almost made me poop my pants.
  5. petrzmax

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    Thank you! It's very nice to hear that. If you have any ideas what i should add to my game please tell me.
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    Thank you! I will increase player's speed a bit and I will try to add more stuff. I also have some new ideas. Stay tuned for Beta 0.6 :D
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    New version 0.6 is available!
    - Player's speed increased.
    - New scary thing.
    - Small optimization.
  8. miguelvesga

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    Downloading...
    Btw, you should upload a webplayer :p It's easier than downloading it.
  9. petrzmax

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    Hmmm Webplayer for this game is a great idea :D
    This isn't very big update but... you can scare in a new way :)
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    New version 0.7 is available!
    - Resolution option in menu
    - Files optimization
    - Added lamp model
    - Improved slender script
    - Small fixes
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    hey petrzmax can i do a gameplay of this and upload in youtube??
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    Yes of course! If you make gameplay, please send me on pw link to your video. I will share it on facebook and this thread :)
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    Great work!

    I think you did a great job of setting an atmosphere, as soon as I started playing, I felt straight into the game. The main menu music... I love it :D
    It may not suit entirely for the theme of the game, but I just love it anyway. As for constructive criticisms, there is a couple of things you could work on.

    The mouse sensitivity. I'm glad you put the option in the menu to change the sensitivity, but I don't think it should be all the way down by default. I entered the game with an extremely slow turning speed, before realizing I could amp it up in the settings. This was my only real major issue.
    Add more scenery stuff I guess, and maybe slightly lower the ambient world light.

    Other than that... good job!
  15. Alex Cruba

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    where is my webplayer!
  16. petrzmax

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    There were some bugs with step sounds, i will add webplayer as soon as I fix it.

    Edii:
    Ok, I have fixed this bug, so webplayer version is Online :D
    But still there is bug with resolution, but it don't mind in gameplay :)
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  17. Alex Cruba

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    Sorry, getting Error...
  18. petrzmax

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    I will reupload it.

    Edit:
    I reuploaded it but now i can't see anything on this site. I think server is offline ;/

    Edit 2:
    I don't know why, web version is working on chrome but on Interenet exploler it's not working ;/
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  19. Acelondoner

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    I get an error at the end of loading the webplayer. I use Firefox.
  20. Alex Cruba

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    Dropbox always works for me and is kind of a standard here I think, why using an exotic solution? ;)
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    Ok, now webplayer version is working!
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    sweet, this looks actually pretty nice :)
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    I peed myself when the light turned off. I am easily scared
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    Player movement speed is really too slow. In some corners on the floor are lightsources, don't know why. When you move up and down light on the floor the corners get lighten.
  25. petrzmax

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    I'm using unity free so I can't use shadows. I actually don't know how to solve it.
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    It was just what I noticed. In the top corners it don't happens...
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    Good that you're using it as a learning exercise. Remember folks, slender is the new pong.
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    It's caused by lights in hallway. Light pass through walls.
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    Its a great start : )
    Two suggestions:
    Menu music is a bit off, need to be more scary so the mood is correctly set before even starting the game.
    Some props would be nice, the rooms are a bit empty now.
  30. petrzmax

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    I will add more stuff, now I'm working on it :)
  31. Alex Cruba

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    Hey Hippo, how about ~Slenderpong~ :D
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    My friend gave me idea for mini game :D You will unlock it when you complete survival mode. It's surprise ^^ Stay tuned for beta 0.8 ;)
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    Version v0.8 is out!

    Changelog 0.8
    - Tv noise effect
    - Improved slender script
    - Adapted to the Web version
    - Mini game
    - New spawn points for keys
    - More stuff
    - New music in menu
    - Some fixes
  34. Louchein

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    I don't like Slender games. Not because I'm tired of them, but because my heart can't take it. I like to see what content updates are like, new content, revised content, models, textures, etc. I love all that, I hate being scared. I'm a wuss. I'm a cat. I'm a scaredy cat. Plus I have a heart condition. I just can't handle games like Slender. Darned brain, and it's chemicals.

    I do wish you luck though. I just won't be playing it because I get genuinely scared by games like these. Makes me wonder, if I live long enough, what horror games will be like in 50 years with virtual reality headsets becoming a reality. Maybe one day someone like me will have a fatal reaction to Slender Man creeping up on them in the year 2025, and I'll be sitting on the sidelines thinking "I'm next!"
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    If you play a lot in the games like this one, you stop to being afraid of such things ;)
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    Version 1.0 is out! (important bug fixed)

    Changelog 1.0
    - Problem with collecting key (Sometimes, there wasn't key <TrollFace>)
    - small bug fixes
    - easter egg added
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    Hi guys!
    I have a question to you. Do you think that I should add version for Mac Linux?

    Edit: I have added new Screenshots and video.

    Sorry for post under post.
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  38. Greg Sergeant

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    Faithful to the original, good sound design. I like how the mouse-look feels, how is it smoothed out?

    To improve the game you'd have to break its tie's to the inspiration. Horror works by the unknown, and by already knowing the game rules some of the fear is lost.
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    It's smoothed only by Mathf.SmoothDamp. Smooth time = 0.1
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    Changelog 1.1
    - Fixed problem with stucking on walls
    - New Slender model
    - Window / Full screen mode in settings
    - small bug fixes
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    Changelog 1.2
    - Fixed problem with collecting Key
    - Improved Easter Egg
    - Improved flashlight.
    - improved control
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    i found the easter egg!!!!!

    spoiler alert:

    when you start, walk out the room and go to the right. then turn left into a long corridor, near the end of the corridor will be a big room, go inside and in the top-far-right corner is a picture, click the picture.
  43. cristianrcoll

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    Hi pertzmax / Everybody! could you go check out my video on 'Slender The Nine Pages' and could you go add me to the thread if you find my video good too everybody else go like the video. I even found the easter egg :D
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8t-VSXiCDgs
    Last edited: Apr 4, 2013
  44. petrzmax

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    Good job with easter egg! ;)
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    Changelog 1.3
    - Added Hardcore mode.
    - Added more sounds.
    - Added pipes.
    - Bug fixes.
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    Added version 1.3+ with better graphic!
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    WOW Your game is AWESOME!! THANKS!!!
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    What 3d modeling program did you do the terrain with?
  49. petrzmax

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    I used Blender and Gimp for all objects and textures ;)
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